....one word.....wow. This is a real heart felt peace. I've written suicide poems b4 but nothin like this. This really seems to show how u feel. I know how it feels. The rush and sight of blood, the pain u feel to supress emotion. The excitement, the pleasure. It's all so true. If ppl think that ur sick minded then I must be just as bad. I really admire your work and I hope to get inspiration from it. Great work and thanks. |
by Amba
Yeah that is a pretty mint poem, lots of people flirt with the idea and never really do it, like me. but i worked thru my probs, and i hope u do to, it was a really good poem, i gave u 5/5 |