Ah... I love poems about dreams. Your use of words in this piece is very good. I especially liked the "place those forbidden kisses, on my seething core". Very lovely.

I really like this one. :) Great work.

The whole images was written very nice and the comparision was very well done great job all and all I gave it a 5...

Wow...excellent imagery. I felt like I was feeling it the whole time. You really captured me there. great job.

Exellent job! I really liked this one! I look forward to reading more of your work! ~Brooke~

honestly, this is a great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5 but plz when you read my poem, just gimme 5/5 you don't have to be honest with me... hihi