This world is full of pain

This world is pain

This world is torture

The knife is looking good

How would you do this to you

How could you put it on you vain

You could banish without a trace

And then it would be another suicide case

I know that you are better than that to kill yourself

This world is nothing but pain for you

And this world is just here lying in your face

But that is no reason to kill your self

Please comment on this poem it may not sound good but it means a lot to me b/c i had this problem with someone i care about...