First let me say WELCOME TO THE CLUB!!

Now I'll say that I thought you could have kept going. To give details, ya know? But it was good.

I'm not sure what you were trying to say at the end. You said you are nothing with out him but then you said just a something. It's one or the other. Pick one...lol. You could proof read this and find a couple mistakes.

They'll be many more... (boys that is) Nice start cherry! Take Care....

Hope you enjoy the club... :)

This was a cool poem. It woulda been nicer if it was longer. But good job, showing this guy how much he means to you.

Take Care,
Renee