excellent poem!!!

i know what pain your going through......ive been going through it for over two years now, over the same guy......just try ur hardest and itll all work out for the best!! just think positive and also always remember that suicide is not the answer....suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem!!

itll all get better!!!

God Bless!!! =)

Megan.. I don't know you but I dont think you are that bright to figure out not ALL poems HAVE to rhyme

You are really good at writing poetry.. its so sad that your trying to kill yourself over a guy though..