the thing with long poetry is the reader often gets lost. you know its good when they last on until th end and thats just what i did with this one. GREAT work and thanks for your comment it did make my day!!! :)
love sammi xxx

well... what can i say? actually i cant say anything ... great poem even though its so long. you are really good at it so keep it up and i am looking forward for more great poems.

by the way ... thanx for the comment

Great job, long, but loved it. hugs and love

good poem 5/5
thanks for the comment

I absolutely adored this poem. Just... wow! Long, but incredible. You didn't waver from your subject and yet had variety. You truly have talent. Great!
Car

This was very, very good, like the rest of your stuff. 5/5.
James

That was really good! Usually, with long poems, I get bored of it half way through n then just give up with it. But this one kept me going all along. Well done! U described da feelins perfectly! Definitly 5/5, well done. Please comment n rate some of my latest stuff when u get da chance please, thankz. Take care

Peace xXx

Wow, what can i say. u seem to almost read my thoughts. i know the feeling so well. one of my best friends is a guy and i love him so much (its not a sexual thing, just a friendship) and i think im about to lose him, coz hes leaving skool and is thinking of going away...so yeh...thanks hey. ill read others of yours.. can you read mine sometime? thanks,
love emles

This is really good, and I know exactly how you feel. I have a friend who makes me feel all these things and more. But keep up the great writing. And thanks for the comment on mine, it really means alot!!!!
Stephanie

I like this alot. its wonderfully written, though i can't say much because I'm a new writer, but i do like this!! 5/5