by Nicola May 28, 2005
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
My life is a fire. |
by Robert
You seem to have way too many ideas out in the wind but little to hold them all together you seemed to jumped from subject to subject without even staying focused on the core topic of your poem. well nice attempt. If you get time please any of my featured work and comment and vote it would mean a great deal to me. Take care... |