Very nice job with this one! I loved the rhythm indefinatly. keep it up

Love, Heather.

Ilinca that was very good I though and it seemed like everything went right where it should great poem cutie :)

I liked this poem but it left me with alot of unanswered questions I think if you thought it over you could bring some light to these ominious figures and this would then be a great poem just a thought.If you get a chance could you look at any of my featured poems thanx...