Obsession

I like this poem alot i like how u said

I hide all day and all you see is light
so you don't see the darkness
that I keep in tight.

It's sad that people often lock their sadness within themselves. I find that often people are so judemental and uncaring (or they pretend to care when they really don't) that I find it better to just keep everything to myself. But it's good that you write, writing is a good way of getting things out :)

-Steve
PS. thanks for reading my poems and commenting

I liked your poem alot:) To be honest I've read a few of your poems and I like them all, but some I like a bit less mainly because of the structure of them, maybe it's just the way I read poems, probably. But yea, I like them all:)

Best wishes,
Patrik

I know how you feel shove things all in then building a wall so it cant get out but no one can see in and only a tiny little hole in the wall shows whats inside... however let me tell you it will NOT go on forever it wont stay hidden for long you see in science when water freezes in the cracks of rocks the rock breaks farther... well your lil looking hole will be more and more pressured and eventually it will get bigger until eventually it will crumble and all of your emotions spill out... i know what u will say i dont have a looking whole my wall is sturdy but keep looking i promise you u have a peeking whole... and whether you like it or not your feelings will come out... they will hurt you and others too but in the end you will feel SO much better that depression will just disappear and a real smile on your face will appear... trust me good job i loved it!
*~~Kat~~*

awsome poem. deep but with a operpose