Seasons Within Time.

by Wintersolstice   May 28, 2005


I am the autumn,
Boss of red and gold,
Leaves turn my colours,
As soon as the're told.

I am the winter,
And I command,
All snow, hail and ice,
In this cold land.

I am the spring,
You can't win this fight,
Harsh winter give up,
Bow down to my light.

I am the summer,
Older sister of spring,
I am-queen of warmth,
And the sun is king.

I am the morning,
Wake up my sweet,
If you be last night,
Be gone from my sight.

I am the afternoon,
I will be arriving soon,
Hope morning woke you well,
So you can enjoy my company.

I am the night,
Dark, full of malice,
You will be my servants,
As the sky is my palace.

I am the moon,
Shining into your room,
The first line of defence,
Against the nights power.

I am the stars,
That twinkle and shine,
I am those in fame,
And given many another name.

I am the sun,
As introduced by summer,
Do say if nights coming,
And I’ll do a runner.

Behold infinity’s magic.

Copyright Mairi Mackenize 2005

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  • 19 years ago

    by Nici

    This pieces upbeat rhythm seems to set it off nicely. Again good description and imagery.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 19 years ago

    by Darien

    This is an amazing peice of writing. The images of each season, of each time of day, is very clear through your words. Creative! The rhymes were amazing, and although the flow was broken, it made the poem even better. I'm going to add you to my favourites. This is one of the best I've read. 5/5 :)

    Darien

  • 19 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    great poem! 25/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    I like it... I think it would suit better in the section poems about nature, though, because it does have metaphors revolving around good ol' mother nature.
    The flow was perfect; for a poem with a rhyme scheme, I think you should congradulate yourself on it.
    However, I do think that the only thing this poem is lacking is proper spelling and grammar. For one:
    "As soon as there told."
    "there" should be "they're". There are some others, but I'm sure if you read through it again you could correct it.
    nice work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ria

    What I got from this great poem was that a human keeps in him the power and pride of nature, and in general is everything, drawing his power from emotions.I don't know but this is what I understood:)

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