Aww so beautifully sad, JJ. keep up the great work! 5/5

Love, Heather.

Very sweet. It is a beautiful write I agree.

--Sher

So sad JJ. Very touching write. Great job. hugs, love *Ann*

O wow! This poem is really great. It made me cry...and I read it to my friend and then she cried too. Keep up the writing I'll be back to read your future poems! By the way thanks for the comment!

Go JJ! This poem was great! Congrats on the front page! Keep it up! (",)

~Krissy

=''''{ I'm cryin. That was so sad. It's very beautiful. Great job, keep it up. Peace, //Ari\\

snif....great poem
great ending
great rhymes
10/10
PeaCe. LoVe, PrOsPeRiTy

Hey that was a great poem... Keep up the good work and visit my poems sometimes!! That was a very sad poem!! I CRIED:'''( 5/5

wow that poem was realli well written but is so sad at the same time. Gud job though.
love me
janine
xoxox

wow, thats sad. depressing, but in some cases true. very nice job.

This is one of the most touching poems I've ever read. What made you write such a great poem? - Rox

Amazing.. nothing more I can really say.. Keep writing you have talent.. take care ((always) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

very sad but nice pt of view..5/5:)

excellent poem! it's so sad but yet she seems to have hope and bravery. thanks for the comment, it was a pleasure to read!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

very sad, hope the girl can beat cancer, no matter how good heaven is or seems. one of my mates has cancer at the moment, so i can relate

well written, take care

love mark xxx

oh my god
very nice;y wriiten

Oh wow umm my cousin died from cancer and this brought it back excellent poem so sad