by David Munoz May 28, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Dear God, |
by Mandy Lou
That is a beautiful poem and that girl is so very lucky to have an expressive guy like you! Another 5 for you! |
sweetness...very good poem...I think it could be better if you didn't use as much rhyming (esp first stanza), but well done. |
by Amy
Wow!! This took my breath away. Yes, whoever this girl is, she is VERY lucky!! Wonderful job on this poem.... I love it!!!! :D :D |
by Brookeღ
So beautifully written! So full of love! Very well done! Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of your work! Take Care! Brooke~ |
by Robert
This was a very nice poem it read very well and the message left butterflies in my tummy. Good job... |