Oh thats beautiful :D

really well written. The ending was perfect, nice symbolism.
(thanks for the comments on mine!)

Awwl.. very different topic! thats what makes it so awesome.. and you are a very talentd writer. 5/5!

That was truly beautiful. I can relate to this poem too. You're a good writer. Thanks for commenting on mine, and just to let you know, yes, I did put that song to music. Take care!
><> Kiesha

If you appreciate constructive crits and comments, Im filled with them...
I like this, you have a wonderful vocabulary and a gift to use it to your advantage. You have a real talent to manage your feelings and structure your poems this well. The first verse is a bit dragged out though the rhyming pattern is good and the words seem to fit together extremely well. Dont change it, I just feel that sometimes making a poem rhyme causes the reader to read it as though it should rhyme....which its supposed to...but it lowers their opinion of it when they read-stumble.
Im going to stop now..

I liked this very much ~ the poem and the title!