I miss you

by cowgirlstar26   May 28, 2005


I was meant for you from the start but why oh why have we been forced apart?
I miss you with all my heart and soul
and to be only with you is one of many goals.
you have had my heart for so long
but i don't know how much longer i can be strong.
the opaqueness inside me has began to cease but the hole of emptiness has yet to leave.
I'm so sick of being hurt and so many times before was I kicked to the curb.
I know you won't hurt me I'm sure of that now.but I have to be with you and I have no Idea how.
when i lay alone at night surrounded by darkness in a never ending fight.
no one can make me feel the way you do
and i feel bad for some people who just don't have a clue.
people say I'm to young but have they known true love?
out of all the shadows my wisdom has changed but forever and always my love for you remains.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This was a good poem, but I think you should put it into stanzas, it'd make the poem have more structure. And some lines have more than one
    subject like:

    "I was meant for you from the start but why oh why have we been forced apart?"

    You should probably put it:

    I was meant for you from the start,
    But why oh why have we been forced apart

    Do this on a couple of the lines and it would be better.