Like a withered rose

by cowgirlstar26   May 28, 2005


Like a withered rose I no longer glow
Like a withered rose my pain always shows.
I feel like I have fallen slowly to the ground
but tho my heart is beating it makes a softer sound

Like a withered rose my color has faded
through everything it's for you I have waited
Like a withered rose my love is getting weak
but I don't understand Y we hardly ever speak

Like a withered rose have I been replaced?
when you dream at night do u still see my face?

Like a withered rose I no longer bloom
Like a withered rose I will be cast out soon
Like a withered rose has everything come to an end?
no matter what u say my love i'll still send

Like a withered rose my heart is turning black
will someone ever love me? or always turn their back

Like a withered rose will I be left alone
or will someone come and break through my solid heart of stone?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    I simply cannot express how deeply and vividly this describes an aspect of me. Brilliantly captured.

  • 19 years ago

    by jencam

    nice job, i enjoyed this one, it was a bit more dark then what I expected but very well written

  • 19 years ago

    by samantha

    wow thta poem is soooo good! well dun xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow that poem was great! I hope some one didnt treat you like that. Anyways the ending part was great really made it all go together! Loved it! 5/5! great work.

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Very nice depiction of the withered rose. Sweet in a dark gloomy manner.
    -A

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