Comments : Velvet Rope

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    wow that;s an awesome poem i love it

    this is my fave part

    Tattered And Torn
    Raspberry Blood Of Broken
    Incarcerated Words
    My Life Has Left Unspoken

    i love that great job

  • 19 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    i like that stanza as well *thumbs up*