a very positive poem Eden, good luck to you both. Maybe things are looking up?

good poem, nice positive thoughts! x

nice...:) wish i could make something like that i just kinda broke up with mine ...hes long distance but well meet again if it is ment to be...we talk and everyting...were best of friends and close but i havent offically met him met him so that is diffrent. well i wish u and that special someone the best of luck and joy. :P

keep it up im envious sometimes of ur poems but its not good sportmanship so i give u writters/ poets props:P

-faithfulserenity

DAMN!!! this computer is soooo spazzed up, i just typed a REALLY long comment and it deleted it.....grrrr...oh, yes i am going to comment on ALL your poems, mabey even the ones i have already commented on becuase they are amazing....hmm...i shall ponder that thought....sorry, please excuse me as i am a little hyper becuase ALL MY EXAMS ARE OVER!!!!!! and i have been eating rice cake, and no, those two arnt related, well they may be but i shall not go into it now as i am meant to be....um....oh yes! commenting on another excelent piece of poetry. amazing, very good, brilliant. i loved it. i did not like it as much as a few of your others but was still amazing.
byes
lucyfer
xxx