Darkness

Short...dark...brillient. i loved it. the words flowed superbly and the structure was great as well. keep up the good work.

Brad

P.S. 'Knock, knock Johnny' is another poem you may want to read if you interested in his story. this was the first poem that i writ about Johnny

Ha! this is very good. it reminds me alot of what im going through.! You see all the poems you read that i have recently wrote. to make a very long story short, my best friend (X) and her X boyfriend broke up 8 months ago. Him and i are also really good frineds. well we kissed and she saw it. so now she hates me!!! but like my last poem... im finished! but this is very good! i like it!

wow that was a great poem! keep writing your really talented!i give it a 5/5.
check out mine if you can...it would mean alot...
--Emily

Very good poem. I liked it a lot. Good flow and everything:)
Keep it up!

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~