by Elynnka
Very good poem. I liked it a lot. Good flow and everything:) |
by MyMercy
wow that was a great poem! keep writing your really talented!i give it a 5/5. |
by ::bRITTANy::
Ha! this is very good. it reminds me alot of what im going through.! You see all the poems you read that i have recently wrote. to make a very long story short, my best friend (X) and her X boyfriend broke up 8 months ago. Him and i are also really good frineds. well we kissed and she saw it. so now she hates me!!! but like my last poem... im finished! but this is very good! i like it! |
Short...dark...brillient. i loved it. the words flowed superbly and the structure was great as well. keep up the good work. |