That is a great poem..What u talkin bout not that good..i loved it..but it'll be okay..so never give up..thats the last u thing you want 2 do..if u ever need 2 talk email me ok..<3 lindey

there you go again, stating your own oppinion lol, i think you made a typo, "end it 'wish' a knife" dont you mean 'with'? lol but it's good 5/5
love always
harley