You Have Not Won

by Elissa   May 29, 2005


I hate you
You hurt me so bad
You made me cry
And I'm forever sad

You took my heart
And tore it into pieces
The pain won't stop
It forever increases

I will never heal
Because of what you did
People warned me
Of you they did forbid

But I didn't listen to them
I thought they were wrong
But they were right
In my life you didn't belong

And you will pay
For all you've ever done
You'll get what you deserve
Because you have not won

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  • 19 years ago

    by lee

    Okay, I'm reading all these poems you wrote about some guy doing you wrong or whatever. and in each and every one that I've read like that...I feel exactly the same way. like it aint even funny. but I am REALLY sorry that you have to feel this way. cuz I know it sucks and it feels like the worst feeling in the world sometimes but yea...I just wanna say I'm sorry that this happened to you cuz I can relate to every word. honestly.and I'm here if you need anybody to talk to. 5/5
    *Lori Lee*

  • and the croud goes wild! lol. great poem! 5/5, i would have commented on 'i love you' but it kept logging me off. but that was a great poem too! now give me some fin, noggin, dude. lol
    love always
    your friend
    harley

  • 19 years ago

    by lindsey

    you tell them girl...cuz guess what you won...Great poem..<3 lindsey