by Marianne May 29, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
When i wake up in the morning, i hope that i wont waste my life |
by wendy
Good meaning but too many happens |
by Goth
Just a suggestion... Try completing your sentences, With a little work I think this would be a great poem but you leave each subject so bluntly it dont give a "vision" to the reader. To me poetry is about invisioning the story the person is trying to tell. Anyway.... just a suggestion, and thanks for the comments! |