WOW!WOW!WOW! This is soooo powerful! I loved it! Girl you are VERY talented!
Love always,
Haily
xoxoxoxoxox

Thank you hun.

wow it is so powerfuland deep loved it

Jacs
xxx

Deep...

I like how you use prison over and over again...very nice...

Rhymes well...no forced rhymes...Good flow, could have been better...

What can I say?

Excellent poem

thank you so much everyone. xxx

thanks xxx