well what to say? sometimes it takes even more strength to stay and fight to save something you have than it does to walk away...for this you have my respect.

From a poetry point of view its probably your best poem also, well, in my humble opinion.

omg that was straight from the heart..Great poem..I didnt't like it I loved it..It was just so how do i say this it was just a real ass poem..So true..great write..<3 lindsey

Beautiful job, written truly from the heart. Well written, truly a pleasure to read. hugs, love, *Ann*

oh my god beautiful, you can tell its written from the heart i think some of the best poems come from being upset and feeling like there is no way out, you open up and feelings come flooding out, in my opinion its healing for the heart,

Very sensetive poem. Forgivness is surely made of God. Love to red more from you.

Deep thoughts- Miss Krueger.

The imagery of the tearing angels' wings is great. There have been times that I have felt like I was just falling, with no wing to soar. Very touching poem. Keep it up.

Brad
Champagne

another masterpiece i love it

Wow, the fact that I just read this and a similar story I heard from a woman yesterday is a lil coincidence. Love truly can conquer all and I believe all can be forgiven....you're a strong person to understand that. Not many do, you see?

I loved the poem, the rhymes were a little simple, but that's okay...the concept was amazing. keep in touch!

Love, Heather
ps 5

great poem! i love it! such beauty and even flow! i can feel the emotions coming to the surface of the page! true love and sorrow and forgiveness! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

thats hot!!, ur flow get me every time, keep em comin n ima keep readin, nice job!!5/5

One amazing poem about love that I have just read.You have an amazing talent.I give you 5.Thanks for your comments on mines.Jeff

Well, honestly I thought the subject was great. However the way it was executed I didn't care so much for. Maybe its the couplets, but to me something doesn't seem right. Still, its pretty good, but not quite up to par with your other works. I'm not trying to be mean, just giving my honest opinion.

Oh wow, I liked this poem alot I especially liked this part:

Falling without my wings into evening glory.
Never to feel the air of a fairytale story.

Then I saw the future in my dreams last night.
A message not to give up this fight.

I'm telling you this from my heart.
I hate the thought of us forever apart.

I will always love you, think of you everyday.
Looking into your eyes, you take my breath away.

Maybe I should carry on without you.
But I just cannot find the way to.

you are a really good writer keep it up loved it. 5. Luv the ultimately always ♥ЀâĎ Ģίя└♥ a-k-a Val

*speechless*

this poem...your writing...wow. i love it. amazing work hayley, enough said.

5.5

love and hugs

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I feel the same way please take a look at some of my poems!!!!

This was very sweet adn highly emotional, however somehtinga bout teh second verse didn't flow right?? i don't know, it was still amazing with each and every syllable. fantastic!
-Suzie

I really liked this, great job. youre truly talented.