by Mark B May 29, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Wandering alone the treacherous path of life, |
Good one, Mark. Though I'm not great by any stretch of the imagination, I'd like to just say be careful of the flow. Sometimes on syllable throws off a good feel. I wrote a lot of poems to the same effect as this one, so look me up sometime. Keep it up. |