very very good. i love it...I love all of it-there isn't one line i prefer over the others-every word is important. very good job.

This poem is soo well written! Very expressive. I love it. 5/5

this is really ...'deep' for lack of better word. i know exactly how you feel...its so hard to not give up. but please don't...i love your writing. x x x

Wow i dont remember writing that comment...hmm:S
yeh more than 5/5...that was great. i can't belive how much i feel the same...
keep writing and take care x x x
PS: plz comment on some of my poems sometime?>..

I really appreicate this poem, beautifully written. Soothing flow and intriguing wording. Well Done. 5/5

Naerwen