very good! the only thing I would suggest fixing, just so that it doesnt through people off is to fix this,
"No answer did my ears did hear" you might wanna take 1 of the "did"s out.. just a seggestion.. but great job! 5/5 , and thanx for your honesty with my poems too! *KISSES*~Corrie

only one thing to say wwwoooowwwww

very intresting poem.. i like the way you described the surroundings and such. excellent job.

I think it was the first to lines that made the poem good...

I have walked on this land long ago,
when the Earth was young and I had an ego.

that was an interesting line...and that line made the whole poem worth reading.the whole 'booted out of eden' theme was unique also.

Really good.I couldn't stop reading.
You Capture the readers atentions very well

I like this one very much. great work.. 5.5 of course. keep it up!!

Loved it!!
"I have walked on this land long ago,
when the Earth was young and I had an ego."
i liked these lines a lott....amazing wrk..lol...i did'nt find any much errors to be highlighted...the poem is good the way it is
xxPoojaxx

Wow that was astounding. Your words gave life to a topic long dead and often ignored. I loved it and it made me think and wonder about everything. really good work 5/5

Ahh. sad. take care 5/5

Left me speachless. Very bone chilling, and the flow once again, awsome. another 5/5 m'dear.
:)