Oh dear; i can see my writing is confused and messy in this poem - there are two girls as such, one being my cousin who is now dead....and the other Tracie, my girlfriend at the moment.

It makes more sense when i had italics/bold for particular parts of it, but you can't do that on this site...can you?

such good and emotional words used...it was a truly great poem x) i voted 5 but wished i could vote higher