by Shædow Poet May 30, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Dissemble: the reason. |
by Luke
very good in the area of vocabulary and wording, but i bet you could improve some of the flow and timing. i still liked it enough for a 5 tho. really cool wording. peace! |
oo that was an extremely cool poem. I loved your exaples and word usage. Very well done. <3 jess |
very nice free flow |