Maybe not the way the out

by ღ*KiM*ღ   May 30, 2005


I'm not one to contradict
But I'm gunna say what I want direct
Cutting yourself is not the way
Value your life for another day
Find another way to stop the pain
I know it's hard but your not to blame
Things go wrong for everyone
Just hold on tight the end will come
The answer isn't held in that knife
Nothing holds the elixir of life
You will struggle all the way along
But so does everyone, just keep strong
Someone is there to help you pull through
Just find that person to help you pursue
Just remember your bodys a case
Which allows a shelter for your soul's embrace
Please be careful don't break its protection
Treat it with love, care and affection
That first tiny cut allows a release
But the energy your soul has will slowly decrease
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger
Stopping this now will make your life longer
The message in this? Cutting's not the way out
Ceasing this habit will help without a doubt.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    'value your life for another day' i like that! this is very good and very true! keep up the good work! i really like this one!

  • 19 years ago

    by fallen angel

    it was amazing to read. you are great at writing poems and getting the message across. xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kymberly

    Awsome poem..good job...your really good...Keep it up =D

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Good job. This poem helps cutters see that yes, it is wrong to cut, and it doesn't help at all. Very nice job, I enjoy reading poems that are against cutting every once in awhile. Nice write,
    Dorotea

  • 19 years ago

    by Dianna M Tuohy

    Brilliant job. For all the cutting poems (including the ones I write) there should be ones like this to help pull everybody through. 5/5