this was beautiful...its not fair ..you know ..your only 18 ...ill pray for you <33

*speechless* That was...great. Sad but true. Wish I could write like that.lol

OOO hunnie this is sooo sad! I hope you will be ok! Stay strong and you can beat this. If you ever wanna talk emial me or add me to messanger.
hottie_haily32@hotmail.com
or
skittles_7890@yahoo.com

Love always...
Haily
xoxoxoxox

Really scary thought 5

Very deep, very meaningful, hope all will work out for you and good use of symbolism with the cancer and how you're feeling.

Words can't describe how sorry I am. Nobody deserves this...Your poem is beautiful. Stay strong; and I truly hope that things will work out in the end.

great write hun. You'll pull through! Stay strong. <3333

An amazing poem, so good of you to share it. It's so good that you have a friend to help you through. I hope everything goes well, I want to be involved in cancer research after university. God luck with everything
xx

your chose of words is truly that of an artist, you paint a beauitful picture in all your writing, i liked the way you bring the reader into your world-that awsome how you do that, hope everything works out the best for you i truly hope so

Really sad, well done, such a shame this is happening, you have a certain style of writing that really absords me into each poem, well done, its great to see your work

very good poem.....

i am very sorry that u have to go through that....my great uncle was just diagnosed with cancer of the colon....i know how hard it can be to live with cancer....

just remember to ALWAYS stay strong and stay positive and always have faith!!!

i will pray for u....RIGHT now to be exact....

God Bless!!! =)

That was a good poem, and I am sorry. I hope that they find a cure for cancer. I will continue buying Livestrong bands and donating money, love.

-Ice

P.S. My featured poems are my best. Don't waste your time reading the others. Thanks again for the commenst!

I'm soo sorry you have cancer :( I hope your friends help you thru it, keep writing keep writing...

aww I'm sure you'll make it through. I wish you all the luck. Keep writing.

i saw a spelling mistake but other than that it was beautiful
~Freak~

I am so sorry to here this, i hope the best for you. It is the scariest thing. But the poem was wonderful, the rhyming was great. Keep up the good work.!

Love Alwayz,
Katie Schettler