GIRL IN MIRROR

by marilyn marti   Oct 8, 2003


There's someone in my mirror
staring back at me
There's someone in my mirror
who just wants to be free
There's someone in my mirror
whose depressed and all alone
There's someone in my mirror
who just wants a home
There's someone in my mirror
who wants to be cared for and loved
There's someone im my mirror
who just wants a hug
There's someone in my mirror
who hates her looks
There's someone in my mirror
who wants to feel good
I wish I can help her
and understand why?
But this girl in my mirror
can never close her eyes

**hello everyone please vote on my poem-i really want to see peoples opinion-it would be so nice-thanks anyway-good luck on ur poems too**

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  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This poem is really good, there is always a time in life, where you just dont like what you see when you look into a mirror. you wonder why you are where you are at. and sometimes you wonder why you are so unhappy.

    Stay strong.

  • 17 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    That is sooo good.... i wrote something like it once, but a little different.... anyway, i love your writting.... its so... expressive... lots of love

    ~bekka baby

  • 17 years ago

    by reborn

    The mirror part was a good idea. ur own describtion of what u feel n what u see in ur reflection. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good job on this one, keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Now this one was good, I liked what I saw.
    The feeling and emotion, left me in awe.
    I really liked how you'd start every line using those words, every time.
    Okay, this was grand... now, this is good work. By the way, Im sorry for being a jerk.
    But the Ripper was once a man I adored. He'd stalk through the night - ONLY KILLING wh0res.
    But anyways getting a little off track heres a 5/5, be nice, comment back.

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