this was my favorite of the ones I've read. very impressive

DA**NM. that was a really good poem. i honestly love your work. im adding u to my fav list if thats ok
5/5
love
paulette

This is an excellent poem my friend.

Great poem, very well written and your rhyming was perfect ღ

not much to say other than that was an awesome poem! lol keep it up!

I really liked this one too....lol...congrats you made it to my favorites list....luv yas mwah

-kayla-

wow. Some poems are so good they speak for themselves. Great job!

You commented on so many of my poems, and never returned the favor...so I shall.
This is a wonderful poem..You have an amazing way a writing.

-xDarkSuicidex

It sounds like u put soo much thought into this poem. u could really feel the it. the rhythm was right on. good job.

Ok, that there was bloody awesome, I love how you used the words damn I'ma need to take some lessons from you lol

This poem is geniuos..love it. Everything about this poem is rigght dotn change a thing not even a single word! This is amazing...vrry deep. BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. one more I LOVE IT and i am off.

LISSA

A brilliant use of voacabulary here, your diction (word choose) and syntax (order of your words) really worked together well in this poem to bring out a great over all effect. Over all I've loved your poetry, thanks for the invite to read it.

-Tainted Mikochan