by Chad May 30, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Heart split open for all to see. |
by tisha
Your a really good writter....... Keep up the good work!!! |
Thats good. niice job. |
by None
One thing I noticed is that you put periods at the end of every line...you do not need to do that,not ever line in this poem is a complete sentence,like: |
by Piper
wwwwwwoooooooooowwwwwwwwww0.0 |
by lindzy
wow good poem! i'm sure people would care though! just hold on! but that was a very excellent poem 5/5! |