wow good poem! i'm sure people would care though! just hold on! but that was a very excellent poem 5/5!
~*lindz*~

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One thing I noticed is that you put periods at the end of every line...you do not need to do that,not ever line in this poem is a complete sentence,like:

Looking at them in disgust.
and
Deal with this stuff from day to day.

you should look at that when you write poems.

Thats good. niice job.

LISSA

Your a really good writter....... Keep up the good work!!!