Look Around

by Chad   May 30, 2005


I look to the mysterious moonlight night.
I will leave this place without a fight.
I look upon a incandescent star.
I will take the path, murky and far.

I look to the benign sun.
Why is it that I must run?
I look to the tantalizing sky.
Why is it that I must cry?

Trapped inside these walls.
Tossed around like rage dolls.
I look into the black.
What is it that I lack?

The things I wish I could be...
Things I keep inside of me...
The things I wish I could be...
Will end up killing me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I love this one! It's got a great deal of emotions put into it, And it Gets straight to the point! =]

    luv natz x0x

  • 19 years ago

    by Piper

    i like this poem because it as alot of imagery and i can imagine everything you are talking about

  • 19 years ago

    by Rylee

    wow that was fan-reakin-tastic keep up the good work and if you dont mind please comment on mine thanks and much love Rylee

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very well done! I like the feeling in this poem! It's sad but true. I love the ending. Take Care! Brooke~