by Chad May 30, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I often think of bliss. |
by aaron c s
that one felt like it should be read in a coffee house. but in a good way. i really felt like u were tlaking to each and every person living. fantastic job. |
by Rolo
Great ending. |
by lisa marie
now this one was great. I love how you changed the rhyme scheme and i liked the message. |
Great poem! It flowed so well! WOW! Your a great writer! |