AWWW hunnie this is not bad at all! I think it is one of your best... Hunnie your so lucky to have a big bro that is there for you! My lil bro hates me and so does my sis! I have to depend on you guys to me like my sisters and people like Freddy to be my bro! lol...i know that sounds dumb but thats how i feel! hold on to him...
Love you always...
Haily
xoxoxoxoxox

Hey hunnie...this wasnt bad at all!!! i luved it soo much..Tell ur bro i said Happy Bday..keep up the great work!
luv u always and forever,
Shortie *ur cuz* lol

Nive job. I enjoyed it:) Keep it up:)

*Nice

very good poem! keep it up! 5/5!