without question, this is a beautiful poem. Be proud of this piece. I also read "Autumn", another ingenious write.
Enjoy your gift; it is simply incredible.

This is one heck of a piece of work.....your frind is so very blessed to be loved by someone like you.....your writing is an inspiration to me.....thanks for sharing such beautiful words.....love ya Becky

It's a particulary good piece of work, not beautiful as such but meaningful and carries a message of true friendship and caring towards that person.

Critiscms i find hard to fine in this, though i shall try...

Possibly it was a tad to long winded for the same message to be said? though it was a extremly good poem to be honest.

well done :)

omg so creative!! i liked it alot!! i gave ya a 5!! oh, the Aliens of Yo poem that you read.. um.. it wasn't my idea to write.. it was on one of those poem games that is on the forums!! lol... so i'm not completely insane!! thanks for rating and stuff! i really appreciate it!
love always,
Abcede

Aww.. that was very good! i loved itt! keep up the amazing work! 5/5
jessy