Drifting

by Minkus   May 31, 2005


I’m drifting away
from this world
and its problems
I’m falling behind
the tumultuous crowd
I’m fading away
from this place
and its problems
Out of sight, out of mind
the roaring crowd says.
So I’m out of sight
and out of mind
And I’m drifting…

I wrote this poem when I was feeling a bit detached from the world.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Short but very meaningful. I hope you are still not feeling detached from the world. You surely have something in common with the other talented pens on this site. Nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Excelletn write - with a really good flow and meaning. Keep it up.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    Short and not so sweet...well, a great poem but that feeling is the worst! Great job though! 5/5!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    You definitely have a style of your own! Creative and unique! It's nice to read something besides the norm! ~Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    Great write. I can relate. You have got talent!
    <3Much Love<3
    ~*hAiLy*~

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