Lonely

Hmm tough one to vote for.. had to read it 3 times b4 making a decision.. fortunately for me it was so short. so i would say that the writing was not one of ur best. but the feeling that u describe in it is so strange cuz u urself have no idea why u feel so down. i guess i take it as a moment of despair but somehow with no clue of the reason. that idea i liked. haha i dunno i'm weird so i guess it should be between 3-4. cuz of the last 2 verses that don't follow the poem that much as rimes go i'll have to go with 3/5 :(