I never seen a poem that can talk in two different directions and try to make sense. This was odd to say the least kind of confusing there is a message ther where I don't know the ending was good though. If you get time please look over any of my poems I would be greatful...

You didn't get the message? Weird. All it is, is about nature like wind, trees, and atuff telling you how to be, like a good person. And once you are, you'll go to heaven and thats really when your life begins.

wow i really liked the flow of this one
~Freak~