My Weakness

by marilyn marti   Oct 8, 2003


There's a weakness in my heart that I cannot get over.
There's a soul that's lost inside, that's wandering down and under.
What happened to the strength I had so long?
Should I go on or just give up.

There's a girl that's looking for her way.
There's a girl that tries to survive each day, and inside there's confusion and anger.
Distrust that fades and surrenders.
What happened to the smiles?
Should I keep hiding in denial.

There's nothing more to say,
either way, life's full of mistakes.

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  • 17 years ago

    by reborn

    Hmm.. i don't agree with the rate u have on this poem so far just 3.5! for me this poem is definitely worth at least 4.5! so to help u with that i'll go for 5/5. n don't worry i'm not being generous cuz i really liked this one. the rimes are good. but the feeling that comes out is intense. this sense of u not knowing anymore where ur at. in a state where u don't have the strengh to deal with life n it's problems anymore. very deep feelings. hang in there if that's still true today for u know that life is all about up n downs.

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