Hmm.. i don't agree with the rate u have on this poem so far just 3.5! for me this poem is definitely worth at least 4.5! so to help u with that i'll go for 5/5. n don't worry i'm not being generous cuz i really liked this one. the rimes are good. but the feeling that comes out is intense. this sense of u not knowing anymore where ur at. in a state where u don't have the strengh to deal with life n it's problems anymore. very deep feelings. hang in there if that's still true today for u know that life is all about up n downs.