if youve read this please comment and i will return the favour

WOW thats all i gotta say that was really really touching seriously you got good work keep it up .. check my stuff tell me what ya think !! thanks

hey wow grt poem it was emtional and awsome grt work
always smile
peaceeeeee

thank you all :o) x x x x

Oh my gosh!! That poem is amazing!!! That is soo TOUCHING!!! You should way keep up the work....you CAN go far!

ps. ppl who ask someone who just wrote a poem read my stuff....its stupid and thats mean to say especially when its really sad like this.

Luv Chancie.

that's really sad i have 3 cousins and a brother in law that are in the army so i would feel the same way if one of them died i wrote a poem just like it its called"goodbye" check it out and comment thanx

that was really good...like really really good dont stop writting like that cuz your great..sorry if this really did happen to you.

ALWAYS
briana

:oD
:o)
:o(
(sorry bout the last one its just the person i love is in the army too and i hope i havnt jinxed him. *worried* )

thanks alot for your comment
sam x

wow. that was very good, truly sad.. and hearfelt. i liked it alot. im sorry if it's true.. I wrote a poem similar to that called "A thousand Tissues" you should check it out, I think you might like it... your poem is very good, i enjoyed it!

hey,
thats beautiful, and sad,
keep up the good work.
-xXlostXx

omg your poem was deep. It touched me so much.please keep up the great work. You have a good soul.you can tell by the way you write. well cya.
kimberly

~krazie angel:
course you can. theres no need to ask my permission!
im just glad it touched so many of you and want to say thanks for commenting and i really appreciate it.
thanks again.
all my love
sam x

wow! that was beautiful! If this is true im really sorry! i have several loved ones fighting and i know the feeling watching the news and hoping not to hear their names. words touched my heart! 5!

wel wot can i say?!? anova amzin poem sam! told u id keep checkin up on u! i realy dont understand how u can make each poem beta den da last! keep it up! luvin ya L xxx
P.S check mine out!

this poem is so sad i know what ur going through my boyfriend was in the war tolo he came home twice.n the second time he came home i got pregnant n 2 weeks after i found out he was killed in iraq from a suicide bomber.he never found out that he had a baby girl.named cosette marie.n the hardest part is that my baby looks just like her father.he would have been so proud oof his baby angel from above.i only wanted to let u kno that this poem was good n sad but i started to tell u bout me i am so sorry if u wanna e-mail me my addy is GtnsBbyGrl@yahoo.com

thank you all so so much for your comments. you have no idea how much they mean to me. im really touched that you all liked this poem and those who can relate to it im so sorry but if you have lost someone who you loved through war (or in any way for that matter) just remember the last two verses and remember that love can NEVER be conquered. im sorry if i cant check out all of your work but i have had a fair few people comment on all of my work and it would be impossible to get back to you straight away. i will get through every single one of you eventually though (even if it takes me all year). lol. oh and GtnsBbyGrl~ my heart goes out to you and wish you cosette marie all the best in life, and hope you find someone who you love almost as much as you loved your late boyfriend.
thanks again.
luv you all so much
sam x

wow...im so sorry...im crying...no joke...my boyfriend is leaving on the 16th to go .....i just hope that everything works out for you...just keep your head up....be strong...take care

--broken

This poem really tuched bases with me. I have friends fighting over in iraq that i have known for 10 years and it is hard saying good bye and then not knowing if they are going to come home in one piece or even at all. You are a great writer and i look forward to your next postings.

i knoe how it is to have someone in the arm
my boyfriend is gone and and i dont knoe anything about him

that waz sooooo goood it touched me so much and i am sorry to hear of ur loss stay strong! keep on writing coz ur good at it stay tru!!