thanks for all of your comments :o)
sam x x x

really good, i hope you really didn't feel like that! that must have been terrible, well keep up the good work! 5/5

Oh i almost started crying!!! Excelent poem!!!!! Keep Writing~~~~

SHAWNDA

The man i love is leaving me to go to iraq ao this really made me cry!

WOW, just wow!!! i just completely love it!! so much emotion and it flows so well!! im so sorry 4 your loss!! your love is amazing! great work, keep it up!! xxx take care xxxxxx

i love this poem it is one of the bests it made me cry but it also made me realiz that this war is just for the wrong reason and we have loved ones fighting in it KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!

Very good poem ill give u props on that i have had lots of my family and friends go into the army to it touches close to home Good job Keep it up

TJ

wow that was so great.... if its true i hope that you stay hopeful and know that it can only get better. great job 5/5
*vanessa

Very nice poem, It made me cry! I have friends in the military and I haven't heard from them in awhile. I am also very sorry about you lost! Keep strong, Kristen

Though I am not in the Army, but rather a sailor attached with Marines, I feel your pain when someone loses their Marine/Soldier/Sailor/Airman. I pray that time will heal your heart and hopefully this war will be all over soon. Excellent poem =) Oorah!

HM3 "Doc" Reyes