Persistent Silence

I had a lot of fun reading this piece, especially because of the ending line. As a perogative, it directly commands the reader to fight silence, and that sounds like a very fun thing to do. I've always found it interesting to read through the comments ahead of mine to see what people draw out of your poetry. I was thinking more along the lines of a political and social stangnation, like in Eastern Bloc countries and the People's Republic of China and all that. but I see that people have taken it lots of different ways, like Kevin Murray and bob shank. I think good writes can get a main message across while also playing to individual interpretations, and this did just that.

Amazing simply Amazing no other words can say it more

This is an amazing poem, and i'm trying so hard to find critique apart from praise....and i can't, i'm sorry.

Very well done, and extremly well thought out, feels orginal too :)

Bold effort...it stayed just under my cliche radar...is it about religious tolerance and intimidation?...

Nice one...i'll be watching you aye?

LOVELY poem sweetie. I just love the way you write. The flow was magnificent. Great job:)