wow... awesome. is this one of those poems that relates to human actions? it sounds like it... it was very beautiful. 5/5

i wrote on kind of like it check it out its called "a rose" and comment please to tell me what you think

this was short but good i liked your choice of words.. well done :)

nice work on this poem. it allows for alot of imaging....very picturesque.

This poem is good, and seems to me a metaphor of love.

now roses...roses is something in nature i love. extremely lovely poem...wonderful use of imagery. thanks.

xxx

wow. im kind of speechless. great job. 5/5
love
paulette

Ohhh i love the sharpness in the words you used. The adjectives gives all the objects such a dark image. Awesome.

diffrent, i like the symbolism in this, you dont see that much with young writers. I realy enjoyed this peice...great work.

~Breeze

great metopher of life. that was really moving. great job. i would give it a 10/5 if i could but i cant so u'll ahve to stick with a 5/5

This poem was very sad, but put an image in my head as I read it, which only few talented writers can do. Keep it up ღ

I liek the idea, just a few spellign errors but good job! I really liek your poems:)

I didn't like this one as m uch as the other two but it was still very well written...nice job..luv yas mwah

-kayla-

I really liked the style you used in this poem. It had nice imagery as well. Keep it up.

Eh...again,you pick topics that are a bit cliche...like a rose.the poem was a bit repetitous also,with all of the

"the rose"
and just the word 'the' in general.

I'm not sure what to say...It's rather good though. So many things could be replaced as the rose...meaning, how we often feel. Another good job my dear Chad.

Love,
DarkSuicide

That was a beautiful metaphor of life. it sounds jsut like mine. i felt what i thnk u were feeling and it was pretty strng. keep pouring ur emotions out, it makes it beautiful.

The rose, blown around by the piercing wind.
Wind, unrelenting and unforgiving.

I love those lines! I think im gonna add u to my favs, also I loved your choice of wording in this poem 5.5 awsome write

More beautiful imagery in this poem that let me take an interesting lesson from it. Rose imagery is common so it is hard to use it well, and I think you did a rather good job with it.

-Tainted Mikochan