by Josiah Larson May 31, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Every day you once again call |
by kittykat0232
Wow that was great!!!!! 5/5 |
Yeah I do tend to get off topic sometimes, its kinda hard for me not to get off topic:p I have been trying to get better on working on that but yeah... Some times my emotions get in the way when I write. |
by Atomic
Your rhyming scheme is a bit off, and in the poem, you tend to stray away from the point. |
by Allison
That was a good poem. I really liked it. *5/5* Keep up the good work. |
by shannon
Nice job i like it..nice job..4/5 |