Laughing Isnt a game

by Josiah Larson   May 31, 2005


Every day you once again call
every day I just do the same
you should know by now
when you call I just fall

when I see you at my game
for the times that you came
You should be in shame

knowing what you have done to me
if you would of only seen
that pain I was in

My heart has fallen so apart
into so many little pieces
don't be laughing because
its not funny

you once called me honey
I once was your mate
but you became my fate

You once had a quest
and try ed to be my best
but I should of new
you were like the rest

It was because of you
I had to play that trick
knowing that it was wicked
and I had to be quick

I know you like to play
you try to deny it
But you made that mistake
I know you wish you didn't take
that one big little mistake

I just want you to stay
far far away
I don't need any lies
because i don't have to pay
on that one day
were it happen on that one night

You left me as a stray
and I had to be away
You didn't have to be this way

You call me a punk
But I cant help from what I am
I cant help that you spoiled
My heart all the way till it broiled

I am not sure if you
Thought it was a joke
But all I know
Is you broke
that little heart of mine

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  • 18 years ago

    by kittykat0232

    Wow that was great!!!!! 5/5
    ~*Katherine*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Yeah I do tend to get off topic sometimes, its kinda hard for me not to get off topic:p I have been trying to get better on working on that but yeah... Some times my emotions get in the way when I write.

    It's okey that you told me this, It just helps me to get better thats all:)
    Thanks

    -Josiah

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Your rhyming scheme is a bit off, and in the poem, you tend to stray away from the point.

    I know I do it too, but can't help but point this out to you, because if I can't help myself, I want to at least help others.

    You tend to make your poems too long and the readers would probably lose interest in it before they could get to the very last period.

    I'm not saying that your poems was bad, but I think you can make it better if you try.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    That was a good poem. I really liked it. *5/5* Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    Nice job i like it..nice job..4/5

    thanks
    take care
    shannon