That is sooo sad... I don't think it stinks.. It has a lot of emotions in it.. And i know how it is coming back into writing so keep up the good work.. You're a good writer.. You have talent... 5/5 *hugs* You'll get A LOT better..

~Jessica

This is actualli quite good keep it up x plz plz comment and vote on some of mine x

This is very good filled with emotion, it could use a little revising but all in all it was a great poem

Awesome poem. i love it. keep up the good work.

Great poem hun, ik how it feels when someone leaves =/ keep up the work you're a great writier ^_^